One draft, one review round.
What client feedback looks like when everyone marks up the same copy.
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MonMonday10:00
One draft, three reviewers.
Instead of emailing the PDF to three people and getting three versions back, you send each reviewer a link of their own — to one shared copy.Reviewers Spring campaign — concept v1JActiveActiveJordan LeeMarketing leadPActiveActivePriya ShahBrand managerTActiveActiveTom BeckerLegal -
MonMonday14:20
Feedback lands on the exact line.
Jordan opens the draft in the browser, highlights the headline and leaves a comment. No screenshots, no “on page 1, second paragraph” — the note sits right where it belongs.Comment · page 1Spring into a brighter season with everything you need, delivered to your door in two days.
J Jordan LeeCan we make the headline shorter?
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TueTuesday09:05
Everyone sees the same copy.
When Priya opens her link, Jordan’s notes are already there. She adds her own on the colour page instead of repeating his.Comment · page 3Every panel uses our signature green as the background colour.
P Priya ShahUse the new teal from the brand guide.
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TueTuesday16:40
Legal flags a claim — and you hear it right away.
Tom strikes through a claim and explains why. Your automation rule for new comments pings the project channel, so the copywriter fixes it the same afternoon.#acme-spring via your automationTom Becker commented: “We can’t claim this — please remove.”
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WedWednesday11:00
All feedback, in one list.
Instead of three email threads, you work through one list: every comment with its page and its author. It is your to-do list for version two.Comments Spring campaign — concept v1p1Can we make the headline shorter?
Jordan Lee
p3Use the new teal from the brand guide.
Priya Shah
p5We can’t claim this — please remove.
Tom Becker
p6Swap the stock photo for our team shot.
Jordan Lee
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FriFriday15:00
Version two comes back clean.
You send version two to the same three people. Nothing gets flagged twice, and the only new comment is the one you were waiting for.Comment · page 1 Spring campaign — concept v2Spring, delivered. Everything you need, at your door in two days.
J Jordan LeeLooks great — let’s go with this one.